'fourth' in the below should be 'forth' I believe :P
The air around Leilond stirs in response as serpentine lightning envelops him. The electrical storm continues to build forming a slender lightning dragon. The beast gives off a thunderous roar as it spews fourth a gout of lightning at Starlear!
~ Leilond
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BEVERAGEK
GERSTEINJ2
Re: BOS Typo, 3rd Person
01/10/2013 06:03 AM CST
a gout of lightning
should that be a bolt of lightning? from what i've heard gout is a disease...
<<The real thing DR needs is to get out there to the kids who actually read books.>>
should that be a bolt of lightning? from what i've heard gout is a disease...
<<The real thing DR needs is to get out there to the kids who actually read books.>>
GRIM45
Re: BOS Typo, 3rd Person
01/10/2013 06:09 AM CST
Is this really that hard?
http://bit.ly/ZKTrTP
2nd Definition.
TG, TG, GL, et al.
"Disagreement with the fundamental plan at this point is akin to supporting Richard III vs the Tudors."
-Raesh
http://bit.ly/ZKTrTP
2nd Definition.
TG, TG, GL, et al.
"Disagreement with the fundamental plan at this point is akin to supporting Richard III vs the Tudors."
-Raesh
ILLIENA
Re: BOS Typo, 3rd Person
01/10/2013 06:15 AM CST
> should that be a bolt of lightning? from what i've heard gout is a disease...
It also means "blob". Not sure that's appropriate for lightning, though.
It also means "blob". Not sure that's appropriate for lightning, though.
DR-RAESH
Re: BOS Typo, 3rd Person
01/10/2013 09:32 AM CST
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/gout
"a mass or splash, as of blood; spurt."
Fixed the "forth/fourth" typo.
-Raesh
"Ever notice that B.A.'s flavor text swells in direct proportion to how much one of our characters is getting screwed?" - Brian Van Hoose
"a mass or splash, as of blood; spurt."
Fixed the "forth/fourth" typo.
-Raesh
"Ever notice that B.A.'s flavor text swells in direct proportion to how much one of our characters is getting screwed?" - Brian Van Hoose